This is a redline-correction/guide for my friend Rina-ran.
And as for the face: I think the eyes are a bit too large in relation to the size of the skull. So I’d suggest you make them smaller or give her a bigger skull.
I hope this will help you out.
It’s 3am over here, so I’m a bit too tired to add any commentary. So I’ll let the pictures speak for themselves.
